hmm well the text hott-ed could have used a hard emboss instead of a smooth one a black stroke at about 2-3 and a nice outer glow with a little red :D, the other text look good hmm the fire and the smoke good tuh yup and ohh work pan yuh background it too plain an look nasty =| grayish yellow and black do NOT go together =| seriously that contrast don't work for meh, than from the background and the little thing with the hot head everything good :D just gwan practice yuh betta dan how mi did start out :D on and e thing around you that twirly thing dat fi just come out of give it a brighter color at least it just look plain ugly . Suh yea thats all :D haha
-- Edited by Ranade on Wednesday 21st of October 2009 12:09:03 AM
GOOD A FEW THINGS. Stay away from photoshops default red oultine and the standard bevel. Your fire is a bet messy it need clean up but for someone who just messes around with the program its a good start keep it up