it can gwaan but , yu shudda use more emboss pon di words and a better background wudda madder like inna di forest or wid other dead ppl , like in thriller....tink outside di box
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****************Bavarian WiseWords***************** Lesson1 Put Jesus Christ first!!
Lesson2 Success comes not from just what you know but who you know.
YOW AH WHO SUMMA UNNO AH RUN EEEN PON MI MAN POST MI NUH KNOW SOME BWOY INNO WHO NAME ROJAY? WHO NAME JERZIE AND SUM ADDA LIKKLE YUTE YOW DOE RUN EEN PON MI MAN TINGS MAN LOLLLLLLLLL very nice sweetie
YOW AH WHO SUMMA UNNO AH RUN EEEN PON MI MAN POST MI NUH KNOW SOME BWOY INNO WHO NAME ROJAY? WHO NAME JERZIE AND SUM ADDA LIKKLE YUTE YOW DOE RUN EEN PON MI MAN TINGS MAN LOLLLLLLLLL very nice sweetie
NO MAN TO ME THINGS STEPPZ.... for the feedback darling.