LEAVE POETRY TO PROFESSIONALS-----------------------------------GAMEPUN POEM
Gamepun said
11:33 01/30 2011
LAST NITE SOME GUY A O'D THE ART OF POETRY WID HIM POEM'S OFFA GOOGLE A TALK TO KIERRHA LIKE HIM A ORDER FOOD OFFA MENU...YUTE!! A NUH SOUP WID ALOTTA NOODLE
POETRY IS NOT A BAGGA RHYME SCHEMES AND WORDS PUT TOGETHER LIKE JIGSAW PUZZLE WORDS HAFFI COME WID MEANING WID CONCEPTS NATURAL..IF U CYAAH DO THAT...KEEP SILENT LIKE YAAH WEAR MUZZLE
ITS NOT ABOUT RHYMING "RAT" AND "BAT" AND "CAT" AND "SAT"...VERSATILTY IS WHAT HIM LACKS U VOCABULARY HAFFI INTACT AND EACH BAR COMES WITH A MESSAGE LIKE U CELLPHONE INBOX
ITS NOT ABOUT WRITING FANTASY SHYT TO A GIRL AND TRY TO CHARM HER HEART WITH A SINGLE BOUND WE ALL KNOW THAT THE"ROSES ARE RED AND VIOLETS ARE BLUE" BUT THAT MAKES U SOUND LIKE A JINGLE CLOWN
POETRY IS ABOUT BIENG REAL....HAVING ALTER EGOS AND DISPLAY DIFFERENT CHARACTERISTICS LYRICS IS NOT A MUST BUT IT PART OF THE POETIC ART OF LINGUISTICS
WHEN U WRITE CRAPPY POEMS...U INSULT MUTA, MAYA ANGELOU, CLAUDE MCKAY NICOLI MACAVELI, GWENDOLYN BROOKS, THE GREAT YUSEF KOMONYAKAA, TUPAC SHAKUR ALL DAY
I DONT THINK IM GREATER THAN THEM BUT WE ALL HAVE MESSAGES WE PASS ON AS LEGACIES TO ALL LEAVE POETRY TO PROFESSIONALS YUTE...ITS NOT A WARNING..ITS A SIMPLE HEED TO THE CALL
ssugarlipss (Administrator) said
03:59 02/02 2011
Pun me love read your poems like a astrologist love read the stars
Gamepun said
08:14 02/02 2011
lol@lipsi
{*~*Fra$s*GeNiuS*~*} said
09:04 02/02 2011
poem yute
mark watson said
09:09 02/02 2011
YES :pin:TELL DEM YES .........YAH DI BOSS
GEMINI88 said
14:40 02/04 2011
R.E.A.L talk Pun. Dem ting deh haffi come from the heart..else it no worth it.
LAST NITE SOME GUY A O'D THE ART OF POETRY WID HIM POEM'S OFFA GOOGLE
A TALK TO KIERRHA LIKE HIM A ORDER FOOD OFFA MENU...YUTE!! A NUH SOUP WID ALOTTA NOODLE
POETRY IS NOT A BAGGA RHYME SCHEMES AND WORDS PUT TOGETHER LIKE JIGSAW PUZZLE
WORDS HAFFI COME WID MEANING WID CONCEPTS NATURAL..IF U CYAAH DO THAT...KEEP SILENT LIKE YAAH WEAR MUZZLE
ITS NOT ABOUT RHYMING "RAT" AND "BAT" AND "CAT" AND "SAT"...VERSATILTY IS WHAT HIM LACKS
U VOCABULARY HAFFI INTACT AND EACH BAR COMES WITH A MESSAGE LIKE U CELLPHONE INBOX
ITS NOT ABOUT WRITING FANTASY SHYT TO A GIRL AND TRY TO CHARM HER HEART WITH A SINGLE BOUND
WE ALL KNOW THAT THE"ROSES ARE RED AND VIOLETS ARE BLUE" BUT THAT MAKES U SOUND LIKE A JINGLE CLOWN
POETRY IS ABOUT BIENG REAL....HAVING ALTER EGOS AND DISPLAY DIFFERENT CHARACTERISTICS
LYRICS IS NOT A MUST BUT IT PART OF THE POETIC ART OF LINGUISTICS
WHEN U WRITE CRAPPY POEMS...U INSULT MUTA, MAYA ANGELOU, CLAUDE MCKAY
NICOLI MACAVELI, GWENDOLYN BROOKS, THE GREAT YUSEF KOMONYAKAA, TUPAC SHAKUR ALL DAY
I DONT THINK IM GREATER THAN THEM BUT WE ALL HAVE MESSAGES WE PASS ON AS LEGACIES TO ALL
LEAVE POETRY TO PROFESSIONALS YUTE...ITS NOT A WARNING..ITS A SIMPLE HEED TO THE CALL