DEAR SON, THIS IS YOUR DAD, I TOLD U I WAS GOING TO THE SHOP BUT I HAVENT RETURN SEE THINGS ARENT WHAT THEY SEEM BUT IN DUE TIME U WILL LEARN
LIFE HAS BEEN HARD FOR ME, BUT UR TOO YOUNG TO UNDERSTAND U ONLY HAVE UR MOM AND GRANDMA AND THATS THE PLAN
ITS NOT THAT I DONT WANT TO BE A PART OF UR WORLD, THINGS GOTTEN THE WORST WAYS I MISS WHEN U WERE BORN, UR FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL AND EVEN UR 6 BIRTHDAYS
ITS NOT THAT IM BIENG BAD, BUT UR MOM AND I WE NEED TIME OFF TRUST ME I FEEL EVERYDAY WHEN UR SICK, EVERY TEARS U CRY, WHENEVER U COUGH
EVERY MORNING, I WAKE I SAY TO MYSELF "A WONDER WAAH GWAAN WID CZAR" I MISS UR BIRTHDAY CAUSE THE U.S EMBASSY REFUSE TO RENEW MI VISA
U DONT KNOW WHAT IM TALKING BOUT, UR A KID, BUT YET UR SMART I WAS NEVER AROUND TO HELP U RIDE A BICYCLE OR SEE WHEN U DROVE A GO CART
I CANT WAIT WHEN U GROW UP, JUST PROMISE U WILL BE BIGGER THAN UR DADDY NO MORE TAKING BUSES, JUST CARRY YOUR MOM TO SUPERMARKET IN UR CADDY
U REMEMBER THAT CAR THAT U SHOWED ME U LIKE, HAHA, I SAW IT ON THE T.V I WISH I COULD GIVE U ALL U ASK FOR, BUT THATS A WISH, ITS NOT EASY
I DUNNO HOW THINGS WILL GET, BUT AS SURE AS THE SUN SHINE,I WILL BE THERE JUST PROTECT UR OLD LADY AND KNOW, THAT I WILL ALWAYS CARE
SO HIDE THIS LETTER FROM MOM, DONT LET HER KNOW, THAT I WROTE THERES A LIL MONEY IN THE ENVELOPE, THATS ALL I HAVE, A HUNDRED DOLLAR NOTE
SAVE IT UP FOR A RAINY DAY, OR WHENEVER UR HUNGRY,U KNOW WHERE TO HIDE YOUR STUFF THINGS WILL SOON GET BETTER, YOURS FAITHFULLY, THINGS WONT BE SO TOUGH
-- Edited by gamepun on Tuesday 6th of April 2010 10:54:44 PM
soldier007 said
22:53 04/06 2010
This Deep Yo.....
MZ Legend said
22:57 04/06 2010
yea mun pun mi rate diss,
quoolie said
22:58 04/06 2010
him a try stay pon the safe side
viren said
22:59 04/06 2010
pun idk if is de ganja im meh head or wat but dis have real hieghts star and dis very inspirational to say de least homie keep the good work up star and nuff respect.....THANKS!
kangol19 said
23:00 04/06 2010
deep
KrYsIs said
23:04 04/06 2010
KEEP WRITING PUN...GOT TALENT
Shem1 said
23:20 04/06 2010
TRUE WORDS
U MIGHT GET RECRUIT FROM THE POERTY CLUB
Dj Tweety said
23:24 04/06 2010
OMG !!!! I GOT TEARS IN MA EYES I LOVE DIS I FELT IT IN MY WOMB CZAR YOU'LL SEE DADDY SOON BABY
Fyahwall_Ent said
23:24 04/06 2010
KOOL NUH MAN...MI LIKE IT
Gamepun said
00:19 04/07 2010
thanx alot ppl....da one yah really touch me heart
empressmonifa said
01:34 04/07 2010
wow! dat really touch me wonder if so my son will feel one day.. bless PUN keep it up babes
TBDGlamma said
06:43 04/07 2010
da one ya touch me Pun BEST POEM ON ZONE!!
Gamepun said
08:00 04/07 2010
thanx appz
dark_law said
08:08 04/07 2010
the poem actually makes me kinda angry, ill never read it again. But props pun this sick--i think it should get atleast national attention, not all fathers are fu ked up as life wud allow us to beleive...
Gamepun said
09:56 04/07 2010
well a just the vibe weh mi a feel at the time , yuh seet@law
tassie said
09:59 04/07 2010
awwwwwwwwww this is like..... *speechless** mi a read and mi eye full a wata
HABLA RUPTION said
10:05 04/07 2010
MAN POEMS DEM A GO HAAAAD AS USUAL.........CONSCIOUS WORDS
Gamepun said
10:09 04/07 2010
tassie wrote:
awwwwwwwwww this is like..... *speechless** mi a read and mi eye full a wata
hush babes
StreeteWize said
12:38 04/07 2010
Pun wid di maawd Poem dem.......
Yo mi feel ur pain UTE
Hope seh ur ute really kno di TRUTH
More while ah suh mi miss my SON
Mek mi pree fi buss all mi GUN
DEAR SON, THIS IS YOUR DAD, I TOLD U I WAS GOING TO THE SHOP BUT I HAVENT RETURN
SEE THINGS ARENT WHAT THEY SEEM BUT IN DUE TIME U WILL LEARN
LIFE HAS BEEN HARD FOR ME, BUT UR TOO YOUNG TO UNDERSTAND
U ONLY HAVE UR MOM AND GRANDMA AND THATS THE PLAN
ITS NOT THAT I DONT WANT TO BE A PART OF UR WORLD, THINGS GOTTEN THE WORST WAYS
I MISS WHEN U WERE BORN, UR FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL AND EVEN UR 6 BIRTHDAYS
ITS NOT THAT IM BIENG BAD, BUT UR MOM AND I WE NEED TIME OFF
TRUST ME I FEEL EVERYDAY WHEN UR SICK, EVERY TEARS U CRY, WHENEVER U COUGH
EVERY MORNING, I WAKE I SAY TO MYSELF "A WONDER WAAH GWAAN WID CZAR"
I MISS UR BIRTHDAY CAUSE THE U.S EMBASSY REFUSE TO RENEW MI VISA
U DONT KNOW WHAT IM TALKING BOUT, UR A KID, BUT YET UR SMART
I WAS NEVER AROUND TO HELP U RIDE A BICYCLE OR SEE WHEN U DROVE A GO CART
I CANT WAIT WHEN U GROW UP, JUST PROMISE U WILL BE BIGGER THAN UR DADDY
NO MORE TAKING BUSES, JUST CARRY YOUR MOM TO SUPERMARKET IN UR CADDY
U REMEMBER THAT CAR THAT U SHOWED ME U LIKE, HAHA, I SAW IT ON THE T.V
I WISH I COULD GIVE U ALL U ASK FOR, BUT THATS A WISH, ITS NOT EASY
I DUNNO HOW THINGS WILL GET, BUT AS SURE AS THE SUN SHINE,I WILL BE THERE
JUST PROTECT UR OLD LADY AND KNOW, THAT I WILL ALWAYS CARE
SO HIDE THIS LETTER FROM MOM, DONT LET HER KNOW, THAT I WROTE
THERES A LIL MONEY IN THE ENVELOPE, THATS ALL I HAVE, A HUNDRED DOLLAR NOTE
SAVE IT UP FOR A RAINY DAY, OR WHENEVER UR HUNGRY,U KNOW WHERE TO HIDE YOUR STUFF
THINGS WILL SOON GET BETTER, YOURS FAITHFULLY, THINGS WONT BE SO TOUGH
-- Edited by gamepun on Tuesday 6th of April 2010 10:54:44 PM