You don't know what to say to me, or even where to start, you don't know how to stop me, from tearing apart your heart. yes i really love you, and yes i always will, but inside my head there is a voice, screaming yourself you must kill. yes i am going to miss this world, but i no longer have a choice, because i can't do anything, but obey my inside voice. it's screaming inside me now, i am pulling at my hair, i wish the other me would go away, because for you i really care. my thoughts are deceiving, of death and of life, but then that voice screams out at me, kill yourself with that knife. but you see i have already been dying, because my mind makes me crazy, so as the tears stream down my face, the *la*hd rush makes everything hazy. i see what will be the last, drop of *la*hd from me, for now my body and eyes are weak, and i have set my soul free.
vanyerzz said
19:58 09/30 2009
its kinda depressing but good
Dj Dancehall said
07:05 10/01 2009
no dont go towards the light
Gamepun said
10:34 10/01 2009
damn, thats sad yow, mi love the poem tho
ADW1N said
10:35 10/01 2009
Fibi said
06:41 10/02 2009
Indian Princess...
Very powerful poem, you have captured true thoughts of a troubling mind. I have been down this road, and I too know how those voices work.
or even where to start,
you don't know how to stop me,
from tearing apart your heart.
yes i really love you,
and yes i always will,
but inside my head there is a voice,
screaming yourself you must kill.
yes i am going to miss this world,
but i no longer have a choice,
because i can't do anything,
but obey my inside voice.
it's screaming inside me now,
i am pulling at my hair,
i wish the other me would go away,
because for you i really care.
my thoughts are deceiving,
of death and of life,
but then that voice screams out at me,
kill yourself with that knife.
but you see i have already been dying,
because my mind makes me crazy,
so as the tears stream down my face,
the *la*hd rush makes everything hazy.
i see what will be the last,
drop of *la*hd from me,
for now my body and eyes are weak,
and i have set my soul free.