What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide because what i really feel emanates from deep inside the feelings that i feel burn and tear my soul because a part of me is gone so i am no longer whole
You left me in a flash you never even turned back once from that day until now love has never had another chance What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide it is impossible to hide due to my weak will and strong pride
What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide what im really feeling, makes me hate being alive What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide im ready to give up, and take away my own life
What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide is not up to me to decide but what im really feeling is something larger than life
JamaicanQueen said
16:00 08/20 2008
ohhhhhhhhhhh somebody in love
Kayliababy said
16:11 08/20 2008
Good 1!
LiL mAmA said
21:47 08/20 2008
awwwww...its hard to find a gangsta dats a gentleman and one dats so deep at that. nice stuff :)
Ranade said
22:35 03/06 2009
good one
Talented said
12:52 03/07 2009
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so sweet but at the same time sad...
giovanni said
15:44 03/07 2009
mad
Msz JayBee said
18:51 03/08 2009
jay jay said
18:52 03/08 2009
-- Edited by jay jay at 19:52, 2009-03-08
Shottess said
18:55 03/08 2009
wow...didnt realise there was so much talent in the poetry section...
*think i found a new fav forum*
gangsta gents
because what i really feel emanates from deep inside
the feelings that i feel burn and tear my soul
because a part of me is gone so i am no longer whole
You left me in a flash you never even turned back once
from that day until now love has never had another chance
What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide
it is impossible to hide due to my weak will and strong pride
What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide
what im really feeling, makes me hate being alive
What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide
im ready to give up, and take away my own life
What I'm really feeling, my eyes wont let me hide
is not up to me to decide
but what im really feeling
is something larger than life
-- Edited by jay jay at 19:52, 2009-03-08