HERE I RE-EDIT IT TELL ME WAT U THINK R IT STILL TOO SIMPLE

WEAK, VERY WEAK........IT NEEDS A DESIGN DOCTOR

WEAK, VERY WEAK........IT NEEDS A DESIGN DOCTOR

well it captured my attention with it colors (i like) however i think more graphics should have been incorporated

too bright

the concept good to go. However, sort out the graphics. You can do much better with the color balancing and graphics have come a far way for us to put that up as the "The Banner"